Showing posts with label Lords of the Dark Fall. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Lords of the Dark Fall. Show all posts

Saturday, February 04, 2012

Saturday Snippets :: Taste

Today's Saturday Snippets theme is Taste so here are Cassandra and Marcellus on a trip to the supermarket in my latest work in progress, Lords of the Dark Fall - Marcellus by Candy Nicks. (Book Two of the Lords of the Dark Fall series) This is an unedited draft.


The brightly-lit supermarket hall paled in comparison with the great markets in his capital city of Brenna. What a soul-destroying experience to wander the sterile aisles devoid of scent and smell, the fruits and meats all neatly portioned and wrapped. To listen to the insistent sound laughing referred to as music. To follow the sheep-like tide of humanity to the place of payment.

“How do you live this boring life?” He hefted the shopping into the small boot of her car. Shoved the cart away.

“No, don’t do that.” Cassandra pointed to a small shelter, under which were parked more carts. “Park it over there and get the deposit back. And for your information, my life so far has been fulfilling and interesting. I have no complaints.”

“I mean this place. It has no…soul. Food should be bought with the senses. It should speak to us, seduce us with scent and taste. The markets on my world. I wish you could see them. So much colour and noise.” He raised his eyes to the gloomy sky hanging heavy above them. “Your world is so grey. No wonder everyone looks miserable.”

“Miserable? Well, it’s winter. Everything’s dead. But you wait, come next week they’ll be stringing fairy lights, singing carols and everyone will positively explode with jollity.”

“This is the festival of winter?”

“We call it Christmas here. I’ll explain it all to you sometime.” She took the cart herself, sensing he wasn’t about to demean himself to collect the small coin they’d used for its hire. Such trivial matters were beneath him. While waiting, he cracked the crusty loaf in half and tore off a bite. Utterly tasteless pap. The cheese fared better. Crumbly and sharp, he’d polished off the whole square by the time she returned.

Guiltily, he wiped crumbs from the corner of his mouth. “Tell me there is better fare to be had than this. I would feast with you, Cassandra. Celebrate our alliance in style.”

“Well, I’m fresh out of oxen,” if that’s what you had in mind. And if it’s colourful markets you’re missing, we’ll see plenty of those in the New Republic. Get in, it’s starting to rain.”

Lords of the Dark Fall, Book One Fabian will be available this spring. Book Two, Marcellus will follow shortly. I'm writing both of these together so I can get them out with only a short gap in between.

Saturday, January 28, 2012

Saturday Snippets - First Kiss from my latest WIP

Today's Saturday Snippets theme is First Kiss so I'm bringing you the first kiss between Cassandra and Marcellus in my latest work in progress, Lords of the Dark Fall - Marcellus by Candy Nicks. (Book Two of the Lords of the Dark Fall series)

This is unedited first draft.

With determined stride, he marched her to the dark red of one of the smaller buildings, guarded by two men in white suits and bow-ties. And right in front of them, he slid a hand behind her neck, angled back her head and kissed her full on the lips. A swift, abrupt kiss that ended almost as soon as it began, giving her no time to respond.

“Just keeping up appearances,” he murmured before placing a hand on her back and steering her towards the waiting doormen, who’d witnessed the display with the bored indifference of ones who had seen it all before. “Come, my little lucky charm, let’s go in.”

“Lucky charm?” She was still recovering from the kiss, which had made her head spin and left an imprint of hot hard lips on her own, the feel of his hand holding her neck so possessively.

Completely immune, she told herself. The doormen waved them in with no more than a cursory glance at the token. Maybe the kiss had been some kind of code, who knew what games Marcellus was playing? She caught a glance of the two of them in the mirror-lined foyer, a tall hard man with a woman she hardly recognised, like something out of an old gangster movie. A hint of an enigmatic smile on the woman’s face, as if privy to some secret she wasn’t about to divulge.

Rubbing a finger over her lips, she wiped away the kiss, but couldn’t for the life of her get rid of the smile. One kiss and he’d reduced her to mush? She’d been too long without a man in her life. Marcellus, on the other hand, appeared to be the master of game face. By the time they’d purchased stakes and made their way into the brightly-lit interior, he’d lost all hint of frivolity and had eyes only for the game in progress, the spinning wheel, the cards flipped so effortlessly by the elegant hostesses.

“What do you mean, lucky charm?” she whispered. “You said I was here as ornament only.”